Friday, March 9, 2007

One More Thing - Day 12

One more thing before I shut down my computer for the day. I just finished the ad below. It took me about a day to write and revise. I think it's great!

Check it out:

Headline: If you're making less than $300 an hour, you're not doing this.

Dear {first_name}:

Have you always wanted to make money the easy way? Do you believe with the right guidance you will succeed?

If you have the desire and the will to succeed you can make your efforts pay off big.

There's a simple way to do it..copywriting.

Good copywriters get rich when they create wealth for businesses. So you can see why good copywriters are in high demand!

So how do you get started? How can you become a great copywriter?

The fastest way is to study with someone successful. Learn how they did it and avoid the mistakes. Easy right?!

It is! There are lots of programs out there that cancharge anywhere from $100 to $1,000 a month. For your money, you usually get some study guides and a few tips but not a lot of personal guidance.

You'll find that our program is different. You have direct access to our team of experts. Learn from people who started where you are and made it big.

At this point most people would be thinking what's this the program all about? What are they offering?

This is a program anyone can afford. The only payment is your effort.

Now you're probably wondering can this program really be that good if they aren't charging money?

Oh we will be! As the apprenticeship program develops the pricetag will be comparative to others out there. Right now we're systemizing and putting the pieces together. You can get in on the ground floor. Be a part of our team as we move up to the big leagues.

Do you want to be on our team?

When you join us you need three things.

An open mind
A positive attitude
A strong work ethic

When you bring these three traits we'll show you how to succeed. With our guidance you will manifest the life you've always dreamed of.

This is a once-in-a-lifetime opportunity you will not find elsewhere.

Get started, take action. Send your full name and email address to And we'll start the selectionprocess.

To your greatness,

Mark Myszak
Win Game Ventures, Inc.

P.S. This offer won't be around forever so act now!

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